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never one to chase dreams cuz life held me back

strapped me in for the ride with a brick on the gas

had no were to go life melted like wax

until i found a path that put me on the right track

but the task at hand was to heavy for my arms

stayed shootin for the stars but landed on mars

isolated with booklet and nothin but a pencil

recorded pots and pans just to make an intrumental

increased the potential with every spliff we hit

stayed true to the game but we didnt bring a mit

just words that merged and began to mature

into something so ill that it couldnt be cured

infected my body disaese in every vein

but lead to mass of peace inside my brain

along with a few personalities on the side

these rhymes seem to grow naturally within my mind



wake up in a world were everything is so flip-flopped

i believe in karma but im still getting my chips conned

get stomped, as my gravity makes chins drop

flow heavy metal like im spitten straight slipknot

pit stop, cuz i need a break from reality

fill up my space ship off to another galaxy

pound of weed with ET as drift so freely

work on my stradegy as nasty as a cavity

my mouth just speaks of wisdom but i dont got teeth yet

i sometimes start spitting before they got beat set

i speak threats verbally harrass the freshman

asken me all of the questions only one who teaches lessons

teaches step aside and let me run the whole class

and then when i get home i fill up a full bowl of grass

sit up on my a*s turn the tunes and write raps

and feel the time pass as i pop some white caps



both are done to different beats, sorry haha.Rate my raps please!!!?
nice! you should record those! i think you would be really good ;)Rate my raps please!!!?
Wow they're pretty good I could feel the flow as I read it :)



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